Here are two quick samples from this week. A client provided text for these first two initial products for their online store. I asked if I could revise the text. The quick revisions are posted below. The client was very happy with the revised product summaries.

ISO Internal Auditor Online Workshop”
BEFORE: (client provided text)
As a business owner do you ever wonder if activities are being performed to how you anticiapated? This course provides an explanation to how to use auditing techniques to evaluate effectiveness of processes. This is course is ideal starting place for professionals wanting to add auditing capabilities your resume. This course is an introduction to the ISO internal auditor requirements for ISO 9001; ISO 45001; ISO 14001; ISO 13485; AS9100. This workshop is designed to practice auditing an internal audit program.
AFTER: (revised)
As a business owner, do you ever wonder if your business processes are being performed as efficiently as possible? This course provides an overview of auditing techniques to evaluate the effectiveness of your business processes. This workshop is designed for the practice of performing an internal audit. It is an ideal starting place for professionals wanting to add some auditing skills to their resume. This is also the required Introduction Course for the ISO Internal Auditor courses ISO 9001; ISO 45001; ISO 14001; ISO 13485; AS9100.

Elite Corporate Consulting Online Series 1”
BEFORE: (client provided text)
Elite Corporate Consulting Series 1 goes through 8 Modules to really get a glimpse of could ISO Consulting be in your future and launching an ISO Corporate Consulting Business. This coupled with series 2 can get you well on your way to doing some level of ISO auditing, consulting and or training.
AFTER: (revised)
Could ISO (International Organization for Standardization) consulting be in your future? Would you like to launch your own ISO Corporate Consulting Business? This 8 module course can take you through the steps to making that happen. For Modules 1-7, you can select to take these either online or in person. The final module, Module 8, will take place in San Diego at a ½ day event.